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Five days
Until the sky turns white
Ten seconds
Until the mid-day night
Twenty hours
Until the sky falls
Fifteen years
Until the lightning calls
Three minutes
To dream a dream
A life time
To know what it means
©2008-2009 *bowen13
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Mood: Noble ~dreamwordbyword:icondreamwordbyword: Mar 25, 2008, 9:21:57 PM
deep. emotive. well done.

seemingly with no present meaning but open enough to be given a new one with each reader.

Bravo.

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*bowen13:iconbowen13: Mar 26, 2008, 9:23:07 AM
OoO A compliment? It must be good (semi-lol)

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*bowen13:iconbowen13: Mar 26, 2008, 9:24:05 AM
AND a fav? My God, at this rate I'll surpase Shakespear in days! (Ok, real lol this time)

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~dreamwordbyword:icondreamwordbyword: Mar 27, 2008, 3:02:27 AM
Heh, you think that highly of my praise...lol (more at me than you my friend)

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Art is just a visual representation of the world, fact or fiction. Writers and Artists are different in only one way. One uses pictures, the other words. Both invoke the deepest depths of the imagination.
*bowen13:iconbowen13: Mar 27, 2008, 5:21:31 AM
I'm pretty sure this is the first time you've complemented one of my pieces without a lot of constructive crit. Therefor, I was pleasantly surprised :D

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~yellowdragonflower:iconyellowdragonflower: Apr 4, 2008, 9:45:22 PM
im pictureing a bomb falling

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