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The Sky Tree by ~bowen13:iconbowen13:



              The Sky Tree

As I look upon the sky,
I have often wondered why
The roots of the great tree all are shown
When the sky is dark and the heavens moan.
They glow so brightly, so jagged and twisted;
Through out all time has the sky tree existed.
As it's roots grow through the clouds,
It's echoing voice sings aloud
The coming of it's bitter tears,
The seeds it's sown through out the years.
It's trunk and limbs oft go unseen
Amidst the clouds heavy screen.
And when the sky is clear once more,
It hides away as it's done before.
Before I die I wish to see
The beauty of the heaven's tree.
©2007-2009 ~bowen13
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So... whacha think?

:w00t: Written, uploaded, and featured all in the same day!

Featured by Doza-DB.

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umm.........to me this shouts, lightning......the lightning seems like tree roots jagged and what not. you say they glow so brightly, so lightning still comes to mind. voice echoing, sounds like thunder, bitter tears, rain? so a storm? well that's what i make of it. if it is so, then you are truly a genius. LOVE IT.

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Thank you and yes, I am a genius. lol

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:iconseanpt:
really good, it flows so well and each line seems perfectly constructed and thought out carefully:D

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Thank you!

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:iconbowen13:
Actually, when I wrote it, I wasn't thinking of the tree as the storm, so much as the cause of everyting from the storm. Or mabey not... sometimes my meaning changes.

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:icondoza-db:
this is absolutly beautiful! :heart: i love it.and yes I will feature it in my upcomming rain-themed journal..i will probably update the journal this friday or sunday.even so, I'll let you know when I'll feature! :aww: ..again, amazing poem..
:iconbowen13:
Thank you so much! :w00t: People really seem to like this poem... what do you like about it?

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P.S. Thanks for the fav

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:icondoza-db:
well i like the words you used...and how you used them..but mostly i like the ideea of a heaven's tree.i find it mesmerizing..:love:..i enjoyed all the comparisons and overall it just gave me a sense of tranquility..:heart:

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