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Tenshin by *bowen13:iconbowen13:



Name: Kagirinai Tenshin
Name Meaning-
Kagirinai: Eternal; unlimited; endless
Tenshin: Changing course or direction; shifting position
Hidden Village: Kirigakure (Villiage Hidden in the Mist)
Eye color: Green
Age: 17
Birthday: September 22
Height and Weight: 5' 9'' 185 lbs.
Hair color: White (his kekkei genkai caused his hair to turn white when he first used it. Used to be black)
Hair style: Messy, he doesn't bother fixing it up most of the time
Clothes: Wears a dusty old traveler's cloak and a rice hat, with a karate style black shirt and white pants beneath. (He wears really simple clothes XP)

Chakra: Lightning
-Efficiency: 100

Rank: Missing-nin

Ninjutsu: 95
Breakdown: Mastery- 100 Effectiveness- 90
~ Tenshin uses his ninjutsu when in close combat to make up for his poor taijutsu attacks. He often uses small controlled ninjutsu to force his opponent close, so he can finish him with his final move, Denkou Parusuha (Lightning Pulse Wave) no jutsu. This attack causes a small electromagnetic pulse that overloads the heart and brain, effectivily shutting them off. Can be used to kill or to stun. It has also been known to short circuit machinery. Another original attack of his, is Erekutorikku Karada (electric body) no jutsu, where he surges electricity through his muscles and brain to give them an extra boost. This is dangerous however, because extended use damages his body. (Yes, Zathc Bell has an attack just like this, I know. I'm... borowing it.) More ninjutsu he has created include:
Chikaranoba (feild of force)- Tenshin forces electricity into the ground, causing an area of ground to be electrically charged, shocking opponents who get close while he remains immune. Does not work on other lightning users.
Konpyuutaamaindo (computer mind)- Tenshin sends a small surge of electricity to a machine, giving it a single command. I.e. Turn on, move, turn off, etc.

~Taijutsu: 100
-Breakdown:
Attack: 50, Defense: 95, Evasion: 100, Accuracy: 100, Stamina: 100, Effectiveness: 100 Speed: 100


~ Tenshin's taijutsu abilities lie in avoiding the enemy and using his attacks against him, therefor his attack is quite low. He has become one of the most skilled tai chi styled ninjas in existence, but his low attack sometimes holds him back. To make up for this, he has developed several original ninjutsus to cover his faults.

Genjutsu: 85
-Breakdown:
Complexity: 85
Mastery: 85
Effectiveness: 85

~ Tenshin sometime's uses genjutsu to trick his opponenents, but this is not his primary strength. His favorite genjutsu is Ushiromae Teresukoopu (reverse telescope), which makes the opponent think Tenshin has traveled much farther back than he has, so the opponent runs right at tenshin and into an attack.

*Grading
A 90-100 Excellent
B 80-89 Good
C 70-79 Average
D 60-69 Passing
F 59 or below Failing

Fighting style: Tai chi-ish
Tenshin's tactics involve avoiding the enemies attacks and using them against his opponent. He forces the opponent into close combat, then blocks or dodges their attacks until an oppening is found. Many times, simply turning the opponent against himself by reversing his attacks is enought to defeat him. Then he strikes using powerful ninjutsu, like Denkou Parusuha, to finish them. He also uses kusarigama frequently, which he can imbune electricity into to power up it's attacks.

Strenghs/Weaknesses:
-Tenshin is very smart and resorceful, but sometimes lacks common sense or overlooks obviose things.
-He is very skilled at Tai Chi style taijutsu, but has a very low attack taijutsu wise.
-He is a skilled ninjutsu maker and user
-Is a bit of a loner, but somehow manages to attract friends/comrads anyway
-Slightly OCD and lazy
-Kinda direct sometimes and it comes across as rude.

Noted Abilities: Daikonran (Chaos), his kekkei genkai. This kekkei genkai takes the form of a colorless ying yang symbol on his back. It allows him to absorb or release entropy and order from things. Ex. Paper's strewn on the floor. He uses Daikonran to absorb entropy/release order and they stack back up on the table. Ex. 2- Papers on desk. Uses Daikonran to absorb the order/ release entropy and they get strewn about the room. When he absorbs entropy, the yin symbol begins to turn black. When he absorbs order, the yang symbol begins to turn white. If the yin symbol gets to full, he goes on an uncontrollable rampage of destruction, forcing entropy into things until it's all drained. If the yang symbol gets to full, he gains powerful healing and regeneration powers. He absorbs the entropy in the body to make the wound go back to it's original state, i/e/ more order. If they both become full at the same time, he enters Baransu Guai (balance state) where he gains vast amounts of power. In this state he has complete control over entropy and order, gains vast amounts of chakra, and a shroud of black and white chakra floats around him. However, entering this state causes him to become unconcious once all the power has drained. Because the symbol is on his back, he can not see how full it is himself and must guess unless someone else is there.

What else?: Tenshin comes from the Kagirinai clan. They were able to survive the threats of scared villagers after the war by renouncing their ninja ways and promising not to use their kekkei genkai in battle. Tenshin is the newest generation of Kagirinai, and couldn't stand renouncing his powerful ninja heritage. Under an assumed name, he entered the academy to train in the ninja arts, and made it all the way up to Jonin level, but he was eventually found out. Rather than be killed, him and some of his closest friend abandoned the village, and left to travel the world. Tenshin hopes to create his own hidden villiage one day, where him and other kekkei genkai users can train without fear.


Comments: Tenshin is like me in that I tend to not attack directly, but try to force my opponent into submission. I also have some ocd habits and am kinda lazy. I am also a bit of a loner, and I am (in my opinion) very smart, even if I tend to over look obviose things occasionally. Also, I'm 17 and a guy.

(Used cris-m's submission as a template for my guy)
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OC for :iconkonekod:'s contest
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is this a character that you made up?

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why do today what you can put off untill tommorrow,
but what is today but yesterdays tommorrow.
Yes.

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Why, do you like it?

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yes and actually :iconmissmands: and i are creating a story line consisting of are own naruto characters. Well actually we are holding a contest to get some characters made by other people and so far no one has responded.
So two things
Number 1- i was wondering if you would like to enter our contest.(if you want to then i will send the rules)
Number 2- it seems like you know what you are doing with all of the powers and stuff and i was wondering if you could help us with creating the chart thingies, it would be much apperciated
( if i spelt anything wrong srry i am a terrible speller)

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why do today what you can put off untill tommorrow,
but what is today but yesterdays tommorrow.
Sounds intriguing. Send me a note with more info please. What do you mean by "chart thingies"? And sure, I'll enter him into you rcontest too.

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okay thanks. Srry i was under detailed on the chart things. like the character you set up, you wrote out how much genejustsu they had and taijutsu and ninjutsu. Also all of the other info of your person that you wrote. Im not quite sure how those are set up so i was wondering if you could help us. (hence chart thingies )

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why do today what you can put off untill tommorrow,
but what is today but yesterdays tommorrow.
Actually, I stole the structure from someone who stole the structure from the guy hosting the contest. So click on the link in the comment box and it'll bring you there. Did you send a note btw?

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yes i did before i wrote the comment y? didnt u get it?

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why do today what you can put off untill tommorrow,
but what is today but yesterdays tommorrow.
Yah, my internets slow

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I'm just sayin'.
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You're life, you're world, you're game. Alatheya - [link]

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